Undone Dom

Undone Lovers, Book Two

Lulu looked into the security camera feed that let her see into her shop. She couldn’t believe that he had returned. Well, she knew he said that he would return but that was a couple of months ago. Why now?

The he is Master Alton. Lulu’s good friend, Addie had taken a BDSM modeling job. She was to pose with three different men but when she got to the second she fell in love and she never made it to the third, which was Master Alton. Addie’s new boyfriend, Lane is a Dom and he refused to let her met with Master Alton so he came looking to find out why. On his way out of the story, he said he’d be back for Lulu and now he is!

Master Alton is known to be a hard core Master who can train a sub or give a sub corrective training. He’s the one Dom’s threaten to send their subs to when they need corrective training. He’s big and he’s scary and he wants Lulu.

Lulu never looked into BDSM until Addie started sharing with her. Now scared and not sure what she’s getting into Lulu is off to Master Alton’s house. Has she lost her mind?

This is the second story in Lila Dubois’s Undone Lovers series. You do not need to read the first book to thoroughly and completely enjoy this one. This story is excellent and can stand alone.

The characters Lulu and Alton are fantastic. They are not only well rounded but they grow and develop with the story. Each has friends, family and work so you do get a feel as to who they are. But, as the story progresses, these characters evolve and change. They let you into their lives and the emotional draw is strong enough to pull you into each scene.

Even if you read BDSM stories all the time, this one may broaden your knowledge. Master Alton is known as an outstanding Dom and Master. He has rules and he can read subs. He will well aware of the fact that one size or kink does not fit all. He also finds himself explaining to another Master that his sub has needs that were not being met and what turns her on has changed. Through it all, the explanations and training were explained, examined and became a natural part of the story giving you not only a great description but a bit of a lesson.

This story was a total package. Outstanding characters that have the charisma to keep you interested; sexually charged scenes that simulate and titillate and a believable plot that made you think this could be real.

I started this story and found that I had no desire to put it down. I had to keep reading and I didn’t want it to end. I have to highly recommend this story and now I’m going to have to find some more of Ms Dubois’s work because if it’s as good as this story, she’s moved to my auto buy list!


Book Blurb for Undone Dom

Alton is the ultimate Master. An expert Dom, he believes BDSM is a lifestyle and trains women to serve in every way. He recognizes Lulu’s submissive nature but his instant attraction is unexpected and unnerving. He vows to take and train her.

Lulu has been curious about BDSM since her friend met and fell in love with a Dom. When Alton comes looking for her, Lulu indulges her greatest fantasy. In Alton’s BDSM training rooms she’s bound, disciplined and above all pleasured, experiences wilder than even her fantasies. But when she goes home at night, she dreams of Alton, not the whips.

Alton’s whole life has been turned upside down. A Master must live by his rules, but with Lulu he’s breaking every one. The Dom who swore that romance had no place in BDSM has to take a crash course in wooing if he’s going to keep the sub who’s got him in knots.

Reader Advisory: Contains very light female/female sensuality and a brief ménage encounter.


Night Owl Reviews Jun, 2012 5.00