The Pack

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The Pack

Writing this review is a little hard for me. It's hard because I know that I'm giving a low score to a part of the authors' soul. Though I appreciate her attempt to teleport me into the world in her mind-- I have to admit that I never reached it.

The characters didn't feel real, at all. It felt, to me, that the author was just talking to us. Like she didn't think the characters through enough to understand what they SHOULD say next. On top of that, she stated the obvious WAY too much.

Overall, the concept seems great-- but the author couldn't pull it off. I really feel like she should have just let them sit in her mind a bit longer-- because it's obvious to me that she didn't know them all that well.


Book Blurb for The Pack

Shamira is considered an outcast by most, but little do they know that she is on a mission. Kids on Mars are disappearing, but Shamira decides to use the criminals most unlikely weapons against them the very kids of which they have captured. In order to succeed, she is forced to trust another, something she is afraid to do. However, Valens, her connection to the underworld of her enemy, proves to be a useful ally. Time is slipping, and so is her control on the power that resides within her. But in order to save her brother's life, she is willing to risk it all.


Night Owl Reviews Feb, 2013 2.50