I felt that the so-called plot of this story took a back seat to the sex scenes -- which really detracted from this short story. It's perfectly allright to write some mindless sex, but to a certain extent I was expecting a real story and plot and character building and when it turns out to be mostly sex, I get a little disappointed.
Everything was solved way too easily, even when Liana got snatched away and could've made it more interesting by detailing how she got back with actual problem-solving skills -- she "poofs" right back and all the interesting bits are gone in favor for more sex. Not to mention the entire premise of how they started their trip was just easily dismissed.
There was no real character building either and I didn't have a clue why the romance was there. There was no explanation for why they fell in love with her and why things were the way they were. Usually I'd want to read some of the earlier stories to see what exactly is going on but in this case I'm going to make an exception and not go back and read the other stories because I can't see them exactly being illuminating.
I found myself flipping past the sex scenes to find some plot, any plot.
Not a good sign.
I just can’t recommend this title as it doesn’t have the building blocks of a complete read.