Snow White and the Seven Hunks

Interesting idea, but I felt like it flopped.
 
The sex could have been interesting, but I really felt that a lot of the sex was lackluster and I was really distracted by the incessant whining about how "small" Nicole was. There seemed to be a lot more description and discussion devoted to how small she was than there was hot sex. If there was any sizzle, it was pretty much doused by the amount of stress over sizes.
 
Nicole and Brandy's relationship was interesting and it could've been played up more to pump up the plot. However, their relationship was never really clarified in the entire story, which was a pretty big letdown. The weird fascination that almost all of the men had for Nicole was also never, ever explained or even built upon. Brandy's vilification seemed to be a bit too easy, bit too pat to make it plausible that all the men were after her -- which was not interesting.

Lastly, the whole four men being pseudo-married to one-woman thing could have been played up more? I would have loved for that to have been played out a bit more. I really felt that the story could have been much richer and well plotted but it was just a letdown. When even the sex fizzles out -- I'm not quite sure what to make of it. 


Book Blurb for Snow White and the Seven Hunks

LENGTH: Full Novel
SENSUALITY: Carnal Erotic

How bad could it be, Nicole Martin asked herself when she discovered her options were to take the role or face criminal charges with her ‘big’ sister, Brandy? Actually, it didn’t sound nearly as bad as she’d expected once the producer/blackmailer explained. The filming would be done in low light situations. No one would ever get a really good look at her face. And it was just acting anyway, right? They weren’t actually going to do all those things ….

Rating: carnal/erotica—adult situations and language, mild/moderate bdsm, multiple sexual partners, multiple heroes, voyeurism, male and female sibling voyeurism, blindfolded sex, countless ménages through oilrigs and sandwiches, BDSM rack sexual device, spanking, cum shots everywhere, group sex, dick jacking, dick piercing/metal galore, sexual domination, forced seduction, training of a submissive, constant fondling, constant head, constant sex on camera, violence through fights from Doms and Doms in training, and lots of male possessiveness..

*Two older women, seven younger men, and the most coming I’ve ever read in a book in my life. Perhaps the most coming I’ve ever read in all the sex books I’ve ever read. If a woman has ever felt that a younger man was misguided into wanting her, thinking that because she was older she had more experience, knowing damn good and well she wasn’t that experienced, this is the book for you. The best older woman, younger man story, where she discovers that he/they are way more experienced.*


Night Owl Reviews Aug, 2009 2.75